Sunday – Lets write an Essay

Dear friends,

We are really thankful , who have provided the feedback on CSE 2016 initiative till now . Right now we are compiling all the questions,feedback, concerns and will answer them very soon.

If you have not given your feedback yet, please do so .Help us to help you.

This Sunday , if you could spare sometime and write an essay on this topic ( CSE MAINS 2015), we would be able to review it and provide model answer at the end.

The topic – ” Education without values . as useful as it is, seems rather to make a man more clever devil”

Please do write , else one will never know what to improve, how to improve and where to improve.Writing is the only way to get through this exam and only constant writing can shape your answers and increase the quality over time.

The current events of 18th  and 19th will be posted soon. No need to worry on that front, we were little busy analyzing the Main paper of 2015, hence the delay.Hope you understand.

Feedback Link – http://upsctree.com/2015/12/19/feedback-request-for-cse-2016-initiative/

You can either write the essay on the site itself in the comments section or you can directly send it to –

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Thank you

UPSCTREE Team

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By | 2015-12-20T13:14:27+00:00 December 20th, 2015|Essays|12 Comments
  • Jeevaraj Radhakrishnan

    Sir, I have started my preparation only a week back and I am new to this game and am aspiring to achieve upsc 2016. Please guide me. Review my essay sir(page numbers are written on top right corner) And eagerly waiting for your January plan 🙂

    • We are here and will help and guide as necessary 🙂 , Jeevaraj – We are unable to find your essasy , kindly send it to – upsctree@gmail.com again , we will definitely review it.

  • Jeevaraj Radhakrishnan

    Sir, I have attached the image copy of my essay which u wrote yesterday. Did you get it? If so, kindly review it On Dec 20, 2015 9:38 PM, “Jeevaraj Radhakrishnan” wrote:

    > Sir, I have started my preparation only a week back and I am new to this > game and am aspiring to achieve upsc 2016. Please guide me. Review my > essay sir(page numbers are written on top right corner) And eagerly waiting > for your January plan 🙂 >

  • Darshan m

    sir, please review.

    Education is fuel for a person in quest of knowledge , it is required for overall development of an individual. If we try to categorize education we can categorize in to :
    · Formal education

    · Informal education

    Formal education: it is a system based education system and is well organized like school and colleges.

    Informal education: it involves traditional knowledge passed from generations like weaving, priest work. It may have been passed on from generation based on their social stratification , now from only informal education it is difficult to make a living, thus formal education system is needed.

    Since this Formal education system focuses on earning livelihood specialization knowledge needed which makes an individual run behind specialized knowledge leaving behind the true purpose of education which is moral and ethical values. Education without moral values serves nothing to society this would be more individualistic. we may produce quality doctors but what would be the use to poor in society if doctor’s goal is earning money rather than serving he would be like a devil to poor man by charging exhobirant price.
    Specialization of knowledge and moral values must go hand in hand if not then it will be of little value to the society, educated individuals in thrust of money and social reputation leaving their parents in old age alone and are flying abroad western culture of meeting parents once in a year is slowly entering our society , it is not completely wrong but we must not forget our values . In this competitive world the deprived ones are completely ignored all are racing against each other like horses running in a jockey race were individual just aim is to be first no matter what.

    The thrust of money and power making individuals moral less and the education whose ultimate aim is to inculcate values in to individual, unfortunately failing in its purpose and producing clever devils with rather than good human beings.